The biggest problem I had with the paper 3 was that my focus wasn’t stayed on
my thesis throughout my entire paper, thus making my paper incredibly unorganized. There were many ideas in my head that I was not able to put it together in the paper. Though my teacher had given me the areas that she wanted me to cover, I didn’t
stay completely devoted to developing my essay around those areas. Instead, I tended to drift
away from my central thesis. But, in the end I was able to stay on track with the idea and have my peers to give me more ideas and revision. In my diagnostic essay, I did not put in effort into because I thought it was the beginning of the semester and the professor did not ask her to write the perfect essay format. But I still rethought the process back then on how would I start the paper. It makes think over and over again that what would be the best way to write this paper? If it wasn't for paper 2 assignment. I believed I would still be stuck at the same question right now. In paper 2 we went in depth the details of how to write a paper. We look at the words, phrases, analyze each paragraph. We even create a fable for the topic of our own. This assignment definitely made me a better writer when it comes to structuring my ideas.
I was able to learned something new everyday in class. Caitlin always provides us with new activities that will not boredom us. I enjoyed the way she teaches that I can apply to real life lesson and helping others out. One assignment that I thought had the most impact in my life was the invisible narrative essay. I never thought about what is the true meaning behind the message that I've received, the pictures that I've once analyze and turns out to be a different idea. In society we have missed some of the real meaning because some people would not accept it. but in reality, for the long run we should defiantly a step into those ideas. We may have done wrong in the past but we are still on the way to fixing the problems and finding out the truth to many questions. If I was never aware of the situation. I would still sit here and be very clueless W
I was able to learned something new everyday in class. Caitlin always provides us with new activities that will not boredom us. I enjoyed the way she teaches that I can apply to real life lesson and helping others out. One assignment that I thought had the most impact in my life was the invisible narrative essay. I never thought about what is the true meaning behind the message that I've received, the pictures that I've once analyze and turns out to be a different idea. In society we have missed some of the real meaning because some people would not accept it. but in reality, for the long run we should defiantly a step into those ideas. We may have done wrong in the past but we are still on the way to fixing the problems and finding out the truth to many questions. If I was never aware of the situation. I would still sit here and be very clueless W
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