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| The Famous Vershawn Ashanti Young |
Vershawn Ashanti Young’s article “ Should Writer’s Use they Own English”, has made me become more open-minded in my writing. Young’s article is
different, then many written articles that are published. It also differs than
most academic articles as well.
From my opinion I think he is talking about how people are
able to mix different dialects together to make it their own discourse. I also
think he is talking about the idea of changing your discourse when it comes to
academics. He then talks But, Young is speaking
in some type of slang and explains his idea in his own discourse, which makes
this article so interesting and hardcore.
about how writing in our own discourse in academics or
in society can leave us vulnerable to racism. For example, if someone is
writing something with an accent, or is talking differently, such as slang,
than that individual would be called, “Talking black or talking Asian”. He then
says that its people’s attitudes that would think writing is written in a non
correct manner.
After, reading his article and figuring out his idea, has
made me more enjoyable in my writing. He basically announces that it is okay to
be able to write in your own discourse. I feel like I would be more comfortable
writing in my own discourse rather, an academic way. I know my whole life as I
was in school, I had to write in a specific way for a really long time, but now
as I see it, I feel more free. I know I would still have to follow the rules of
English writing, but Young makes it so hard to do that now. I now know someone
who is against it but they can still incorporate it in their work, which I
think is fantastic.
I would always want to incorporate many ideas to my academic
writing, but there is always something that holds me back from doing so. Like,
I would say that the structure, or the format of how the essay should be, stops
me. I have ran into many obstacles and roadblocks as I write essays, because of
the rules on how it should be done. I feel like at times I am not able to get
my point across fully. I may incorporate some of my ideas but sometimes they
wont sound right if I try to transform it into academic language.
I know many people who has also had this issue before. It
doesn’t make us dumb, it really is just that we would prefer to be able to understand
and write things in our own discourse. But, I know how society is and how
things run in this world. So, as a student I will continue on and write in
English writing, even though it may not excite me or keep me satisfied, I will
still do it. But, Young’s point has exceeded my knowledge on how this world
works and how incorporating our own discourse writing can affect many people.
With that being said, I find Young’s article, relatable and
should be attainable for many students who agree with the topic. Who knows what this article can do for
students or it may even spark the mind of student to elaborate more on the
topic. But, as for now I want to reach my goal and graduate quicker, so if
writing in English writing or academic writing will get me there faster, than I
will do so. However, I will still try to continue on using all dialects that I
know and try to incorporate it in my work whenever I get a chance.

I agree with your position for where you stand from backing up Ashanti's argument. This also gave me a different perspective on how to look at this argument which made me reconsider my own position in the argument. What really impacted me the most from your blog was from when you stated that you will still write in the English language that you have been taught your whole life however you will still have an open mind in including your own discourse to a certain extent in your writing in school. Another statement that I agreed with in your blog was that if English writing or academic writing dialect would make you graduate faster or even be successful, I would do the same.
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